Dark Days (huitain)
Impending doom is all to near,completely out of our control.With heavy hearts we wait in fearand pray for peace to save our soul.Alert young soldiers on patrolwill die when trying to defendthe freedom...
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dark days, indeed, suzanne ... how well you've captured the fears and anxiety of these times .... great job here!! very well done Hang my head; drown my fear, 'til you all just disappear.Black hole...
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Very dark days - and well captured here."Write the bad things that are done to you in sand, but write the good things that happen to you on a piece of marble." -Arabic Parable
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Well done, your poem reads very smoothly, a pleasure. Sorry I can't say the same for the subject. You have presented it convincingly though. Well thought out and written. Thanks for sharing it...Angel
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Thank-you Beth Valoe and Angel. There is just a terrible feeling of foreboding. Our fate is not in our hands. I fear it is the end of the world as we know it.Step into Suzie's Sanctuary
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Pure zeitgeist, Suzanne...a piece for the times we live in...well said...Exit light...Enter night...Take my hand...We're off to never-never land...Welcome to...The Maelstrom...
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zietgeist - that's new to my vocabulary, the general intellectual, moral, and cultural climate of an era.Yes, I believe it is. Thanks soulsease Step into Suzie's Sanctuary
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